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Pokemon MD Gen Swap Remake Page 4 by Sonic201000 Pokemon MD Gen Swap Remake Page 4 by Sonic201000
Confused about whats happening in this page? read here.

There's a little jump cut to the part when Zanders out of bed. he's in the same room and the leafeon is Mio's sister Miafeon.

white thunder is a more powerful move that Neak knows. thats why I called Neak user of white thunder.

the one in the hat is Neak from dusk without dawn (an old comic i did). I feel't bad for leaving him for this long. so I gave him a place in this comic too.

the other pikachu is Neon.

they don't know its Zander who is that riolu girl.

so far Zander became a girl, Miafeon is getting her hair done and........the team is talking out side.....and..........huh. I'm slow to explain story's. ^^; The next page will make EVERYONE confused I'll tell you that.
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:icondaphneysilly:
Daphneysilly Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Where's no 5?

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:icondangerzonedragon:
DangerZoneDragon Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
 I... I don't get this.
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:iconmatthew18044:
matthew18044 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
is this comic finshed yet?
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's cancelled because it's getting remade.
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:iconmatthew18044:
matthew18044 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
OK THKS
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sorry
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:iconmatthew18044:
matthew18044 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
its ok but weres the remastered
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haven't started.
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:iconmatthew18044:
matthew18044 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ok can you plz make it fast i want to read it soo bad i loved all the tgs you made

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:iconmn2431:
mn2431 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Your comics are grate and I love how clean and lively your art style is. The story line to this one is very creative. I just have one peace of advice about this page. When doing a jump like that in the storyline it helps the audiance to follow along to mention it in a box like you used in panel 4 
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:iconshaprite91:
Shaprite91 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Lol Zander. xD
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol? XD
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:iconshaprite91:
Shaprite91 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Zander, what are you doing there?
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zander: NOTHING!
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:iconshaprite91:
Shaprite91 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student General Artist
hehe
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:iconuryalgreycut:
Uryalgreycut Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is not that confusing. It's pretty easy to get.
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
people dont get it. ^^;
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:iconuryalgreycut:
Uryalgreycut Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hm. That's bad luck.
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:iconbec66:
Bec66 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
So is this neak guy part of the team now?
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes and no. is very compacted
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:iconbec66:
Bec66 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
So he's like that one guy that comes out and saves the team at the last minute when they're in danger?
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no. I can't tell you yet. sorry.
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:iconsesshaxiii:
SesshaXIII Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Confusion :dummy:
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:iconholic-virus:
HOLiC-ViRUS Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
*sees third panel*
...Zandy...whatre you doing???
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zander: nothing!
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:iconholic-virus:
HOLiC-ViRUS Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Are you suuure?
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zander: YES!
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:iconholic-virus:
HOLiC-ViRUS Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
okey...:meow:
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zander: WHAT?
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:iconholic-virus:
HOLiC-ViRUS Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aaw zandy you know im just messin with ya :)
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zander:,,,,,sure.
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:iconfirelucario:
FireLucario Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012   Traditional Artist
"The next page will make EVERYONE confused"

Wait, what? It will? :O_o:
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yep
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:iconemolg:
Emolg Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh god XD I Knew it would become funny!
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:iconryusuta:
Ryusuta Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012   Digital Artist
Brilliant work as always. Though it seems like there was a bit of a jump cut. Like... first he... err... she was in bed with the eevee, and then she was in a room with someone else. Just the same, I'm ADORING this comic!
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its the same room. just her sisters in it too. its a little jump cut but not a big one
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:iconryusuta:
Ryusuta Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012   Digital Artist
Ohhhhh! That makes more sense now!
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:iconniznize:
Niznize Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
I'm already confused ^^;
Especially the last panel did.
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
how? whats confusing?
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:iconniznize:
Niznize Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
1: I don't understand what user of white thunder wants to mean.
2: Is that Pikachu there the same you used to draw once on your other account (Neak and Fike's adventure, or its title was something like that)?
3: Who is the other Pikachu next to Neak/in what relationship are they/how they both know about the transformed Zander?

Just tell me if you're going to explain something later. I don't want you to tell me everything in advance, just those things which doesn't seem clear to me, Please:3
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:iconsonic201000:
Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
1. white thunder is a more powerful move that Neak knows. thats why I called him user of white thunder.
2. it is Neak from dusk without dawn. I feel't bad for leaving him for this long. so I gave him a place in this comic too.
3. its Neon. however they don't know its Zander who is that riolu girl.

sorry for the comfuse-meant.
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:iconniznize:
Niznize Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Okay, now I get everything (except in what relationship Neak and Neon are).
And yeah, you've changed many times lately your main characters. That's why it was I wasn't sure that I'm seeing Neon in the last panel. You're kinda like me at this point, as I've noticed. You can't draw someone the same twice :)

And a good advice: you make me usually confused by these sudden jumps. Maybe other people don't tell this (because they are probably glad that they see you doing something nice and don't want to discourage you), but I'm always honest, especially to my friends, and my advice is: try to look at your comic as if you would see it for the first time, and ask questions in yourself (how we got here, who are these new characters, what do they have to do with the characters I got to know before) and connect things to each other somehow.
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Sonic201000 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
can't tell you why Neak is with Neon at this moment. sorry.
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:iconniznize:
Niznize Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
It's alright. Thanks
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:iconuryalgreycut:
Uryalgreycut Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Good job, by the way!
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:iconuryalgreycut:
Uryalgreycut Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love Neon's expression from the last pannel...
What means fudge?
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:icontarkles:
Tarkles Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"FUUUUUUUUUUUDGE!!!!!" :D
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