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Mios got pen on her face. ^^;

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~Bec66 Aug 18, 2012
That Neon :D
BTW what's going to happen to the hope in darkness comic.
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~Sonic201000 Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
stoping it. sorry. all the ocs from that comic are in this one.
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~Niznize Aug 18, 2012
I kinda got the line, but I have got the same problem here what :iconuryalgreycut: mentioned here. You make sometimes too big skips between two panels (in time) without mentioning it, and it makes hard to follow the storyline. If I were you, I'd have drawn one or two panels where Neon is painting on Mio's face (or whatever xD).
Same goes for the transition between the 2nd and 3rd panel here. When did he notice that boulder? how did he get there? Why did he go there and didn't stay on the path? All these questions remains unanswered by hurrying so much with the story.
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~Sonic201000 Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
right. i wanted to save the moment with the pen on Mios face for later. ^^; thats why it seems rushed on that part. however the last panil was a bit rushed coz I was meet to draw Neon running into there butv i forgot too. ^^; the bolder thing. I need to explan it in the next page.
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~Niznize Aug 20, 2012
I'd have made it so that you can see only Neon and maybe that he's painting on something brown and furry. I wish you could see my upcoming comic XD
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~Sonic201000 Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
comic? XD
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~Niznize Sep 5, 2012
Yep. But I don't tell anymore yet:)
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*werfamily16 Aug 18, 2012
It will be funny if Mio already beat Neon to the town and is waiting for him.
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~Sonic201000 Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it would. ^^;
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~Uryalgreycut Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Maybe i am silly or something butt... I got totally lost. How is the story about?
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