I kinda got the line, but I have got the same problem here what mentioned here. You make sometimes too big skips between two panels (in time) without mentioning it, and it makes hard to follow the storyline. If I were you, I'd have drawn one or two panels where Neon is painting on Mio's face (or whatever xD). Same goes for the transition between the 2nd and 3rd panel here. When did he notice that boulder? how did he get there? Why did he go there and didn't stay on the path? All these questions remains unanswered by hurrying so much with the story.
right. i wanted to save the moment with the pen on Mios face for later. thats why it seems rushed on that part. however the last panil was a bit rushed coz I was meet to draw Neon running into there butv i forgot too. the bolder thing. I need to explan it in the next page.