Its not what your expecting.
It's cool that you introduce so many characters already in the beginning. I wonder what Neon's idea is for earning some money.
A poor oshawott... that's pretty realisitc. I like the idea: is one of your OC?
Saif: Change yah got change ah come on help a guy out!
ya know, you're in my pokemon universal group and you can add stuff there in literature